Feedback And Reviews
Pinpoints Key Query Weaknesses
Amy was kind, friendly, and enthusiastic. The thing that was most helpful was that she zeroed right in on the aspect of my query that had been bothering me (but I had been hoping no one else would notice!) and offered concrete suggestions for improvement.

Refocuses Submission Package Effectively
Katharine helped me re-focus my submission package to more accurately depict my work. She is kind and generous and savvy and smart. Our conversation was a game-changer for me.
Challenges Writers to Level Up
CeCe is emerging as a rock star agent. She was gracious and her feedback was insightful. She gave me something specific to ponder as I work to level up my craft and do another revision before heading back into the query trenches. Exactly what I needed. Recommend her highly!
Encourages Writers with Honest Feedback
Alyssa is very wonderful, kind, attentive and helpful. She was the first agent I had a meeting with and has always given me feedback that significantly improved my manuscripts. Sheís also very sincere and honest when giving feedback which helps provide realistic expectations of oneself. Itís agents like her that keep us here!
Thank you Alyssa!
PS: Please pass this on to Alyssa so she knows sheís doing a great job.
Delivers Actionable Query Improvements
Samantha was really awesome. She had great ideas for how I could improve my query and I found her extremely easy to talk to. She was concise and specific in her feedback, and I walked out of our meeting feeling like I knew exactly what I needed to do next. She was also great enough to answer a few questions for me about the querying and submission process.
Gives Supportive and Helpful Critique
Ms. Gomez was so supportive and encouraging with her comments on my first chapter, I have nothing but gratitude for her time and expertise! Her suggestions were specific and very helpful . And many thanks as well to the Manuscript Academy for offering these concise and focused opportunities to get feedback from experts in the publishing field.
Expands Genre and Agent Options
Samantha’s 10-minute consultation on my query was immensely valuable. She was well-prepared, answered all of my questions, and even gave me a couple of names of agents who she thought might be interested in my WIP. Most importantly, she gave me an agent’s perspective on how I should categorize my work in terms of genre. I was being far too narrow-minded about it, and now I know I can expand my prospective agent list. I highly recommend her!
Offers Fresh Perspective on Queries
My 10-minute query consultation with Rebecca Raskin was excellent. We were both ready to go at the start time. I took plenty of notes and Rebecca gave me advice that hit the places in my query that needed work. She was encouraging, helpful, and made me see my query with new eyes. I’ve spent most of today revising it and revamping my query list. I’ve taken advantage of this energy to start a new round of queries tonight. Onward!
Provides Clear Path Forward
My consultation was extremely helpful and educational. Validation that I can in fact write is always, always needed and appreciated, but it was the savvy advice from an industry insider that made it worth the price of admission. Leticia offered honest, direct input about how my query would be received by agents and publishers, adjusting my expectations and clarifying my path forward, in a very good way. She took a genuine interest in me and my work, and tailored her advice accordingly.
Balances Encouragement with Clear Critique
Larissa was so friendly and helpful! She had the perfect combination of encouragement and constructive feedback on my query. She was able to get right to the heart of what I suspected was not working, and offer suggestions on how to fix it. And she answered every question I had. I only wish I could have talked to her longer, it felt like talking to a friend!
Provides Honest and Enthusiastic Support
My consult with Jonathan Burkhart was amazing! He is direct and knowledgeable and more than willing to guide and support. I absolutely love his energy and enthusiasm. He is honest which Is a trait I respect and was most helpful in his comments to help me become a better writer.
I highly recommend Jonathan Burkhart to any aspiring author who is looking for honest evaluation of your story and the possibility that it could be made into a screenplay.
Believes in Writers and Their Work
I cannot heap enough praise on Katharine Sands. She deserves more than I can ever say.
First off, Katharine believes in me. Thatís a BIG thing for someone who has been on a publishing journey for a decade. Her enthusiasm and persistent cheeriness is infectious. It makes every session, no matter how brutal, a pleasure. Sheís also not afraid to tell the truth. She delicately convinced me that my opening chapter wasnít appropriate and offered several suggestions on how to fix it while educating me on what a first chapter should be. Katharine also set me up with an online writing class that vastly improved my skills. She continues to seek out further classes for me.
Again, canít say enough about Katharine. A joy to work with.
