Feedback And Reviews
Provides Honest and Enthusiastic Support
My consult with Jonathan Burkhart was amazing! He is direct and knowledgeable and more than willing to guide and support. I absolutely love his energy and enthusiasm. He is honest which Is a trait I respect and was most helpful in his comments to help me become a better writer.
I highly recommend Jonathan Burkhart to any aspiring author who is looking for honest evaluation of your story and the possibility that it could be made into a screenplay.
Believes in Writers and Their Work
I cannot heap enough praise on Katharine Sands. She deserves more than I can ever say.
First off, Katharine believes in me. ThatÃs a BIG thing for someone who has been on a publishing journey for a decade. Her enthusiasm and persistent cheeriness is infectious. It makes every session, no matter how brutal, a pleasure. SheÃs also not afraid to tell the truth. She delicately convinced me that my opening chapter wasnÃt appropriate and offered several suggestions on how to fix it while educating me on what a first chapter should be. Katharine also set me up with an online writing class that vastly improved my skills. She continues to seek out further classes for me.
Again, canÃt say enough about Katharine. A joy to work with.

Recognizes and Fixes Story Issues
The discussion I had with Ms. Fountain was extremely useful and informative. She helped me recognize an issue with my YA adventure novel that I need to address and I even had fun during her feedback and suggestions. I can tell she is passionate about her authors’ manuscripts and she would make a great agent for anyone who is lucky enough to sign with her. Thanks for having this service. It is worth the price of admission!
Enhances Story Openings with Insightful Advice
Kiki is great to toalk to. Even though she had only my first 10 pages, she had some terrific insights, which will enhance the beginning of my story, giving it more punch. Her advice was in point, and noted.
I also get to craft a prologue for my story….YAY!!
Energizes Writers with Query Feedback
Stephanie was wonderful. She walked me through specific items to strengthen my query and opening pages while making sure to point out what works. I feel energized to revise my query package after her feedback.
Supports Writers in Book-to-Film Adaptation
I signed up for Mr Burkhart because he seemed the most likely to give a good critique for a feature film possibility ó his comments during the #MSWL Zoom panel were pro writer and pro new content and encouraged the audience of writers to consider contributing their content in the new film-media arena.
Jonathan was very cordial and approachable during our conversation. I would book him again.
Thank you to the Julie and Jessica and everyone at the Manuscript Academy for a very informative Book to Film panel!
Strengthens First Pages with Clear Guidance
Stephanie Stein was really helpful with positive suggestions for my first page of a YA historical fiction. She answered my questions with specific answers about character development and quickly engaging the readerÃs interest. I took lots of notes. Thank you for offering this venue for writers. IÃm sure I will signup again!
Shares Kind and Specific Query Feedback
My consultation with Kaitlyn was awesome! She was very kind but also gave me specific, actionable feedback that I can get to work on. Highly recommend her!
Delivers Helpful and Encouraging Critique
I loved, loved my consultation with Amy! She was extremely helpful with my query feedback, and I will recommend her to everyone!
Gives Actionable Suggestions for Stronger Openings
Rachel is awesome. She provided me with bite size actionable suggestions that made my opening chapter so much better. So helpful!

Offers Direction and Encouraging Insights
Jessica is warm and friendly. She gave me fabulous advice and went above and beyond what I expected. I know the direction I need to take with my writing now, in large part because of this conversation. Thank you!
Guides Writers Through Complex Pitches
Caitlin was incredibly helpful. I was struggling with the best way to pitch a fantasy novel that was not told chronologically and she guided me through that process. She answered all my questions and made me feel very comfortable.