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Guides Writers Toward Stronger Manuscripts
Iíve had two calls with Caitlin, an initial 10-page critique and, after significant revisions, a follow-up 30-minute/30-page critique. Caitlin provided great, actionable feedback that I can use to take my manuscript to the next level. This is true not just chapter by chapter, but in terms of achieving a goal of the manuscript (subverting romantic tropes in favor of feminist empowerment) without triggering readers’ assumptions too much or too early. Caitlin is a great guide on a sometimes-thorny path.
Stephanie Losi
March 24, 2025
Gives Insightful First Page Feedback
I enjoyed the fifteen minute consult that I had with Megan Barnard. She provided insightful and thoguhtul feedback of the first ten pages of my manuscript. It was excellent to have an opportunity to gain insight into how an agent reads the first ten pages of a manuscript.
Michael Overa
March 24, 2025
Clarifies Market Positioning for Memoirs
I have had two consults with Kayla regarding my literary non-fiction memoir. I have found her comments to be so concise and helpful, filling in any holes or gaps in my query letter and giving me a knowledgeable insider perspective on where my work would fit, information on navigating foreign markets, and how to approach the process of becoming a published author. I feel empowered to move forward, step by step. I am now polishing my proposal, based on suggestions from our last conversation. I am so fortunate to have found Kayla.
Rachel Elion Baird
March 24, 2025
Provides Smart and Actionable Suggestions
I recently booked a session with CeCe Lyra to get some feedback on my query letter. In the short amount of time we had, she gave me a whole list of suggestions and homework on how to improve my submission. CeCe is insightful, KIND, professional, super smart, and knowledgeable about the book industry. I’m super grateful for all her help and can’t wait to book my next session with her!
Layne Beckner Grime
March 24, 2025
Delivers Honest and Direct Critique
Ms. McDonald provide very direct feedback on a difficult manuscript I’ve been working on. It was just the kick in the pants I needed change it. She didn’t pull lany punches, and she was very right to do so. I’m grateful for the honest criticism.
Jesse Lawrence
March 24, 2025
Improves Reader Connection and Engagement
Samantha had read my first page in advance and prepared very helpful comments, especially in regards to how I can improve the reader’s connection to my character and draw the reader in right from the start. She also answered questions I had about a couple sentences in my first page, assuring me that the level of detail I had incorporated was fine. I felt great about my first page and the revisions I can make when the call was over. (She also checked a couple times to make sure I didn’t have any additional questions, which I really appreciated.)
Jennifer Dupuis
March 24, 2025
Offers Thoughtful and Empathetic Guidance
Eric made an immediate first imperssion by responding so quickly with notes regarding the plot synopsis and chapter I sent. The notes offered great insight and were excellent pick ups. These suggestions were well thought out and not rushed, providing me with plenty of time to consider them for our session.
I chose Eric as he is a talented agent but he also offered an important opinion regarding my story. One of empathy. What I truly enjoyed was just how down to earth he was as well, and helpful. This discussion has put me in a great place to tell this story and with Eric’s guidance I believe I will tell this story better. The man was so relatable the only thing missing were drinks.
Thanks so much, Eric. It was a pleasure to finally meet, and to have this moment talking shop, with you.
Matt Leyshon
March 24, 2025
Saves Time with Honest Feedback
Kaitlyn was kind and honest and gave me just the feedback I was looking for. Her comments will save me time and doubt as I query and help me figure out next steps with my manuscript. I am grateful.
Christi Leman
March 24, 2025
Breaks Down Queries with Precision
Melissa always has something concise and powerful to say. Just a few words, and I understand the big picture of what I’m missing and the direction needed to fix it. She is very constructive and helpful with feedback that helps, as I prefer being coached directly, without sugar-coating or apology. I’ve had several sessions with her and wish I could have her advice on speed dial.
ross buckner
March 24, 2025
Delivers Concise and Helpful Critique
Molly conveyed a lot of information in 15 minutes. She came well prepared and had insightful comments during our discussion–she went a long way towards assuaging some concerns I had with my query package, and I’m glad she offers her time to do this!
Lauren Brady-Sellers
March 24, 2025
Brings Clarity and Excitement
I’ve now had two consolations with Fiona Kenshole, and both have been fabulous. I left with clarity and newfound excitement for my project both times.
Cheryl McCosh
March 24, 2025
Explains Why Queries Get Rejected
Amy’s feedback on my first 10 pages helped me understand why I keep getting “it’s not my thing” passes on my novel queries. I’m grateful to benefit from her vision and experience. She provided specific suggestions for improving my work and (hopefully) snagging more agents’ attention. I can’t tell you how critical that was for me!
She also pointed out a flaw in my query letter that might be turning agents off. So helpful!
I appreciated Amy’s supportiveness and enthusiasm for helping. It was great to be able to ask “burning questions” about the industry that had been bugging me since I started writing. I encourage any writer souls who are lost or maybe just need an extra nudge in the right direction to book a consultation with Amy!
Jaimie Hunter
March 24, 2025