Feedback And Reviews
Clarifies Genre and Story Expectations
Caitlin was professional and polite. She gave feedback with several examples in the text which needed more action, more emotion. She covered structure and expectations for fantasy genre. It went by quickly but it was helpful to me as an amateur trying to break into the industry. I have a feeling I could have asked industry questions but my focus was all about the story. I am thankful for the service by The Manuscript Academy
Brings Enthusiasm and Sharp Insights
Melissa picked up on two-three suggested items to improve my first ten pages. She has a deep understanding for the writing process, and business process. But most importantly, I can tell that she loves it all. Her energy and enthusiasm are uplifting!!!

Steers Writers Away from Wasted Time
It was fabulous. Exactly what I needed. She was direct, supportive but steered me away from at least a year, probably more, wasted time and words. Cecelia was encouraging, and best of all, realistic. Most worthwhile 10 minutes in my writing life.
Thank you, Kristen

Balances Encouragement with Tough Love
I so appreciated the opportunity to work with Eric through MSWLA. He had valuable feedback to offer and struck a balance between encouragement and incisive critique. Some of his big-picture suggestions felt like tough love, but he was right. The consultation gave me the confidence and direction to make necessary changes and begin the querying process.
Delivers Honest but Kind Critique
Cecilia was outstandingly helpful. She was very kind in her critique which was especially hard to do since she needed to tell me some hard truths.
My only concern was the 10 minutes went by far too quickly and I didn’t get a chance to cycle back to a few follow-up questions.
Provides Candid and Encouraging Feedback
Penny came prepared with feedback on my query but let me ask questions and use the ten minutes in the way that worked best for me. We had a great conversation on the state of the market and her feedback on my query AND my plot was invaluable. She was candid and encouraging.
Provides Invaluable and Thorough Feedback
Such great and invaluable feedback! Punctual and thorough.
Renee went beyond what I expected and was so knowledgeable and helpful.
Highly recommended! 🙂
Shares Practical Query Improvement Tips
The ten minutes flew by but not without a ton of amazing feedback and a plan! I am so thrilled with my first 10 minutes with an agent, I will be making a promise to myself to do this monthly! Thank you Kiana, your feedback was exactly what my first pages needed!
Provides Warm and Insightful Feedback
My consult with Stephanie took place in the aftermath of a big nor’easter that left me with an iffy Internet connection. But that didn’t dim Stephanie’s brilliance. Her comments were insightful, her tips were helpful, and her affect was warm and understanding. The consult was productive, fun, and the confidence booster I needed to keep plugging away in the Query Trenches. (It also was a great distraction from the tree branch that smashed my car windshield.) I wholeheartedly recommend Stephanie for consults … and anything else she takes on in the book world. Kudos to Manuscript Academy for all the talent you attract and invaluable services you provide!
Brings Next-Level Query Clarity
Fiona was so helpful bringing clarity to my query. I had many eyes on it prior to our consult, and have received some requests from the slush pile, but Fionaís advice was next level. I feel my money was well spent, not just for this query but for how I can use her advice to self-critique in the future. She was also super nice and easy to talk to. Highly recommend!
Clarifies and Strengthens Query Letters
Thank you for critiquing my query for 101 Glasses of Wine. Molly Cusick was great to work with, straight to the point and helpful. Definitely get a session with her!
Enhances Stories with a Fresh Lens
Cecilia ëCeCeí Lyra was one of the best writing critique experiences that Iíve had on the Manuscript Academy. I was so impressed with her writing critique that I actually paid for another one with her. Her suggestions helped to enhance my work in a way that I hadnít seen before. She helped me see my work through a fresher lens and possibly change it in another direction. What I loved about her was that she was so encouraging while she critiqued my work. You understood that she was critiquing your work and not you. If she thought that you wrote something great, sheíd let you know in a way that made you feel so good. One of the best parts of working with her, is that sheís quick. I hope she doesnít mind me saying this; however, she critiqued my work and provided it back to me prior to the 5-7 week allotted time. I was pleasantly surprised when I found a completed and thorough critique emailed to me earlier than anticipated. I didnít have to wait with bated breath for too long. As you can see, I donít know if thereís enough that I can say about her. I highly recommend Cecilia Lyra for your writing critique.