Feedback And Reviews
Recognizes and Fixes Story Issues
The discussion I had with Ms. Fountain was extremely useful and informative. She helped me recognize an issue with my YA adventure novel that I need to address and I even had fun during her feedback and suggestions. I can tell she is passionate about her authors’ manuscripts and she would make a great agent for anyone who is lucky enough to sign with her. Thanks for having this service. It is worth the price of admission!
Enhances Story Openings with Insightful Advice
Kiki is great to toalk to. Even though she had only my first 10 pages, she had some terrific insights, which will enhance the beginning of my story, giving it more punch. Her advice was in point, and noted.
I also get to craft a prologue for my story….YAY!!
Energizes Writers with Query Feedback
Stephanie was wonderful. She walked me through specific items to strengthen my query and opening pages while making sure to point out what works. I feel energized to revise my query package after her feedback.
Supports Writers in Book-to-Film Adaptation
I signed up for Mr Burkhart because he seemed the most likely to give a good critique for a feature film possibility ó his comments during the #MSWL Zoom panel were pro writer and pro new content and encouraged the audience of writers to consider contributing their content in the new film-media arena.
Jonathan was very cordial and approachable during our conversation. I would book him again.
Thank you to the Julie and Jessica and everyone at the Manuscript Academy for a very informative Book to Film panel!
Strengthens First Pages with Clear Guidance
Stephanie Stein was really helpful with positive suggestions for my first page of a YA historical fiction. She answered my questions with specific answers about character development and quickly engaging the readerís interest. I took lots of notes. Thank you for offering this venue for writers. Iím sure I will signup again!
Shares Kind and Specific Query Feedback
My consultation with Kaitlyn was awesome! She was very kind but also gave me specific, actionable feedback that I can get to work on. Highly recommend her!
Delivers Helpful and Encouraging Critique
I loved, loved my consultation with Amy! She was extremely helpful with my query feedback, and I will recommend her to everyone!
Gives Actionable Suggestions for Stronger Openings
Rachel is awesome. She provided me with bite size actionable suggestions that made my opening chapter so much better. So helpful!

Offers Direction and Encouraging Insights
Jessica is warm and friendly. She gave me fabulous advice and went above and beyond what I expected. I know the direction I need to take with my writing now, in large part because of this conversation. Thank you!
Guides Writers Through Complex Pitches
Caitlin was incredibly helpful. I was struggling with the best way to pitch a fantasy novel that was not told chronologically and she guided me through that process. She answered all my questions and made me feel very comfortable.
Boosts Confidence with Thoughtful Advice
My consultation with Kaitlyn was amazing. I can’t believe how much advice was packed into 10 minutes. She came prepared with notes and was so respectful in discussing my picture book poem. I have more confidence in how to take the manuscript and query across the finish line. Thank you for offering the opportunity to meet with Kaitlyn!
Provides Excellent Query Letter Feedback
Stacey Graham provided excellent feedback on my query letter and MS. I appreciate her taking the time to chat with me and would highly recommend these services to anyone in need of formatting a query letter!