Feedback And Reviews
Sees Straight to the Heart
Fiona is brilliant, kind, and efficient. She has the gift of seeing right to the heart of a manuscript. She understands both craft and the market. I am excited to use her feedback to take my work to the next level.
Helps Writers Navigate Storytelling for TV
Eric Mofford was wonderfully helpful, and he picked right up on things I hadn’t found room to tell him in my query. I feel that his advice has explained so much to me and set me on the right path toward finding a deal for a TV series for my novel trilogy.
My only regret was that I got so excited, I forgot to tell him about all the cinematic qualities of my stories: A train wreck, a solar pulse followed by two more later in the series, an exploding house, and North Lights suddenly in Texas.
Guides Writers Toward the Right Market
I never expected to get so much in a consult about my first page, but Stephanie gave me so much to work with. She was friendly, professional and offered valuable insight regarding the age group I should choose to market to and my main character. Absolutely worth it.
Empowers Writers with Actionable Feedback
Amy provided concrete, actionable feedback that left me feeling empowered instead of disheartened. She made sure to leave time for questions and involved me in the learning process, which I greatly appreciated!
Gives Detailed and Practical Suggestions
My consultation with Kaitlyn Sanchez was fantastic! She gave thoughtful, detailed feedback on my manuscript that resonated and sparked my own creative ideas. She also provided industry advice and practical suggestions that were incredibly helpful. It was such a pleasure speaking with her!
Clarifies Genre and Story Expectations
Caitlin was professional and polite. She gave feedback with several examples in the text which needed more action, more emotion. She covered structure and expectations for fantasy genre. It went by quickly but it was helpful to me as an amateur trying to break into the industry. I have a feeling I could have asked industry questions but my focus was all about the story. I am thankful for the service by The Manuscript Academy
Brings Enthusiasm and Sharp Insights
Melissa picked up on two-three suggested items to improve my first ten pages. She has a deep understanding for the writing process, and business process. But most importantly, I can tell that she loves it all. Her energy and enthusiasm are uplifting!!!

Steers Writers Away from Wasted Time
It was fabulous. Exactly what I needed. She was direct, supportive but steered me away from at least a year, probably more, wasted time and words. Cecelia was encouraging, and best of all, realistic. Most worthwhile 10 minutes in my writing life.
Thank you, Kristen

Balances Encouragement with Tough Love
I so appreciated the opportunity to work with Eric through MSWLA. He had valuable feedback to offer and struck a balance between encouragement and incisive critique. Some of his big-picture suggestions felt like tough love, but he was right. The consultation gave me the confidence and direction to make necessary changes and begin the querying process.
Delivers Honest but Kind Critique
Cecilia was outstandingly helpful. She was very kind in her critique which was especially hard to do since she needed to tell me some hard truths.
My only concern was the 10 minutes went by far too quickly and I didn’t get a chance to cycle back to a few follow-up questions.
Provides Candid and Encouraging Feedback
Penny came prepared with feedback on my query but let me ask questions and use the ten minutes in the way that worked best for me. We had a great conversation on the state of the market and her feedback on my query AND my plot was invaluable. She was candid and encouraging.
Provides Invaluable and Thorough Feedback
Such great and invaluable feedback! Punctual and thorough.
Renee went beyond what I expected and was so knowledgeable and helpful.
Highly recommended! 🙂
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