Feedback And Reviews
Molly was great! She had very helpful feedback for my query and PB manuscript. She also answered my questions and was very nice!
Jenissa provided incredibly helpful feedback for my query letter and first ten pages in a kind and professional way. Wonderful consultation!
Eric is always so supportive and kind. ItÃs wonderful to receive critique and encouragement from someone who genuinely cares about my improvement. ItÃs a difficult journey, but having honest mentors who can help light the way makes it more tolerable.
Kelly was kind and professional in her feedback. She helped me see my first 10 pages from a new perspective!
Katharine is excellent. Bright, honest, and creative. I enjoyed speaking with her and hope to reconnect in the future .
Zooomed an extremely productive and enjoyable fifteen minutes with Katie discussing my query letter and first ten pages. She was well prepared and told me not only how to rearrange and tighten up my letter but also some details to add in.

Larissa was nice and helpful. She’s my dream agent!

Despite my asking for a “harsh” critique, Hannah was kind as well as helpful. She gave me positive feedback and pointed out specifically how I could “increase the stakes” for my protagonist in my query. She answered all my questions with patience and insider insights.
Katie was great. She answered all my questions about the industry and agents’ expectations. She also gave me some fresh ideas for my blurb. I have implemented all her suggestions and am in the process of querying agents. I have more hope than ever that I will find someone to help me break into traditional publishing!
My consultation with Kaitlyn was so much more than I expected. She tightened up my query letter and provided invaluable suggestions to improve my manuscript. What an incredible session!!!
Caitlin provided good feedback on my query, telling me what worked and what needed work. This helped me realize that sometimes one must sacrifice some important element of the story to make the query easier to digest, if there is not enough room for context that important element calls for.
Carina Licon is most of all kind. She addressed problems with my query while also highlighting things she thought were the most impactful. She gave tangible suggestions for how to set up the query better. Ms. Licon was organized in her thoughts on my first 10 pages. She used every last second. It was helpful hearing what she found strong and what jumped out to her. She thoughtfully addressed strengths and weaknesses in those pages. I’m really glad I did this and am very grateful I picked her since she worked hard to get me to see things from the editor’s perspective.