Feedback And Reviews
My 10-minute consultation with Melissa was a tremendous help. Having heard Melissa on the podcast, my expectations were that she would be straightforward and succinct. She met those expectation. Every critique and suggestion got me excited to dive in and tweak my query. Even during our brief conversation, I got the sense that we were making real progress. I hope to one day work with her further. Thanks!
Adeptly balancing respect with honesty, Jenissa Graham provided specific feedback that I found easy to apply to my manuscript and query letter. She also answered my questions and even gave an example when I asked for clarity. I highly recommend a consult with Jenissa for anyone looking to improve their writing.
This was my first time using this service through Manuscript Academy, and Katie was great. I heard comments that I already knew, but Katie confirmed my flaws. She also pointed out areas I hadn’t considered. I’m looking forward to having another session with Katie in the future. I’m always looking to improve and IÃm happy with this new direction.
Consultation with Hannah was an amazing experience. She was warm, kind and showed genuine interest. Hannah offered very detailed and supportive feedback. She had a clear grasp of my story, characters and mission. Talking to her was an absolute pleasure. She is a great resource, approachable and very knowledgeable in her field. I can’t recommend her enough.
Larissa was friendly, professional and helpful. She suggested I make a substantial change to the plot of my story which would make it more appealing to agents. I havenÃt decided yet whether I will follow her advice but I understood her reasoning and it gave me a lot to think about. She also pointed out other issues that I hadnÃt considered previously. Not to say that her feedback was all negative ó I felt that she appreciated and understood what I had presented in my query letter and that she basically liked my ideas. It was an incredibly productive fifteen minutes! No matter which direction I go in IÃm sure both the query and the manuscript will be stronger because of the consultation. IÃm very grateful to have had the opportunity to speak with Larissa. Thank you, Manuscript Academy.
I have only good things to say about my consultation with Alyssa Jennette. A nice balance between compliments and specific, clearly personalized, constructive suggestions. I felt Alyssa ìgotî my novel more than any other agent IÃve spoken with, so she seems like she mightÃve been the ideal agent for me, except, sadly, sheÃs closed to queries.
My meeting with Fiona was very helpful. She nailed exactly what was missing from my first pages and query letter and articulated it in a way that sparked ideas and a course of action. I can see how I can integrate her advice as it was quite specific about what aspects of my first pages and query to put more, or less, emphasis on. I was very happy with the consultation and highly recommend Fiona.
I signed up for this consult knowing my query letter wasn’t delivering the punch I wanted. In the fifteen minutes we had together Jenissa broke it down for me pinpointing my weaknesses but also showing me how to fix them – while being friendly and encouraging the entire time. Definitely a great experience.

Ms. Strouth was absolutely incredible. Not only vastly knowledgeable about the industry, but also supportive in such a way that her critiques are still presented in a positive light and do not discourage at all. I cannot recommend her enough, she is absolutely brilliant.
Fiona gave me really great insights into a children’s picture book I was stuck with. Her recommendations helped take the story to the next level. In fact, she helped me find those places where I could elevate it in a way even other reviewers hadn’t seen, and I’m really loving the result!
I found my consultation with Stacy to be extremely helpful. She asked insightful questions about my story to help clarify a confusing paragraph of my query, and I think my letter is a lot better because of it. She was kind, genuinely seemed interested in my manuscript, and made sure to answer all my questions. I highly recommend meeting with Stacey!
Thank you so much for the opportunity for feedback! This was another useful and productive session. Stephanie Stein gave me concrete, actionable feedback to implement in both my pages and query in an organized fashion. I’m so grateful for the opportunity to speak with her and my previous critique with Blair Thornburgh. Blair’s concise suggestions and Stephanie’s market knowledge and useful notes for my pages and query will help me improve my query package. Thank you for the opportunity to improve my writing with experiences with such seasoned professionals.