Feedback And Reviews
Provides Clear Manuscript Improvements
I was so impressed with Rachel’s feedback! She told me what worked, what didn’t, and gave me specifics as to what I could do to make my manuscript better. I really appreciated her help!
Brings Out StoryÃs Heart
Once again, John was amazing! He not only gave me specifics on what I could do to better my manuscript, he helped me bring out the heart of my story. I highly recommend him! Thanks, John!

Clarifies Novel Struggles with Insight
I had a wonderful talk with John Cusick yesterday. After giving me his initial thoughts, he talked me through an element of my novel I’d been struggling with ever since finishing it. He was kind, thorough, and insightful. I feel much more confident moving forward with my novel now. Thanks, John!!
Pinpoints Issues with Direct Feedback
I had a ten-page live critique with Fiona Kenshole that I found invaluable. She has such a direct, but friendly, way of getting to the heart of what isn’t working. I so appreciate her feedback and Manuscript Academy for offering us opportunities like this.
Validates Writers and Provides Direction
Alyssa did more than just present ‘feedback facts’ she validated my existence as a writer. I know that’s a lot to say, but just by being her, present in the moment with me, she not only gave me helpful feedback on my query letter and first ten pages, but she made sure to talk about the things that are working too. I found her train of thought easy to hop on to, and felt she had a lot of information applicable to not only my writing, but the writing/agenting/publishing journey in general. I highly recommend a consultation with Alyssa, especially if you feel like you’ve tried everything else, and just don’t know where you’re going wrong. Much love girl. <3 <3
Delivers Clear, Logical Query Advice
Jennifer was great! She gave me actionable feedback on both the things I did well in my query and the things I needed to improve. Her advice and recommendations were easy to understand, and logical. I’m so grateful to her for lending her time and expertise.
100% Recommend!
Caitlin was amazing. She had concrete, actionable feedback for my query letter. She explained why she made the suggestions she did, and her explanations made sense and 100% fit with my story and goals. 100% would recommend her to anyone needing feedback on their query letters.
Provides Insightful First Page Feedback
Hi Jessica and Julie,
Jessica, I want to thank you for your thoughtful comments on Catch a Falling Star. I know you went above and beyond in the time you gave me and I really appreciate it. I couldn’t believe how insightful you were, just from looking at the first page. Many of your ideas about where the story should go were close to what is in the manuscript, and gave me further thoughts and ideas about how to improve it. I will certainly continue to use Manuscript Academy and recommend it to my writing friends–you guys are great! (I’m also wondering if you have any time to critique more pages in the future. It doesn’t seem like you have time available on the calendar and I do understand that, but thought I’d ask 🙂
Again, thank you so much,
Meg
Boosts Confidence with Revision Strategy
Amy was so friendly, and had such great helpful, honest feedback. I came away from my consult feeling confident in my revision strategy, and one step closer to where I want my book to be. She answered all my questions, and understood my pages and my goals for my story.
Gives Market Insights and Encouragement
My consultation with Stacey Graham was fantastic! In addition to some specific, actionable feedback on the pages I submitted, she gave me valuable insight on the marketplace and how it is probably affecting my submissions. I came away feeling much better about my current state and moving forward. Thanks, Stacey!
Clarifies Query and Genre Strategy
Ms. McDonald was extremely helpful and encouraging. In 10 minutes she addressed my main question about how to structure the query and provided insight on how she looks at genre/subgenre. These consultation sessions are an invaluable resource for any author planning to submit their work to agents.
Reveals Overlooked Story Weaknesses
The critique with Samantha was so helpful and in unexpected ways! In the flurry of writing a writer can sometimes overlook the most obvious problems, which was the case during this critique. As always, these critique opportunities provided by The Manuscript Academy have proven to be invaluable to my progress.