Feedback And Reviews
Wonderful and Reassuring Experience
I cannot recommend using this service enough! Caitlin was so wonderful and helpful. I was nervous going into the session but was immediately at ease and it was a fabulous experience. I have already recommended this service to my writing group!
Reframing the Pitching Mindset
My query-letter consult with Katharine Sands was absolutely fantastic. She immediately zeroed in on what could be improved in my pitch and helped me see why it might not be landing. She also offered a lot of encouragement by pointing out what worked, and she provided insights into pitching that went well beyond my query letter. I chose her because in her MA class she talks about thinking of the pitch as a way to SHARE your work vs. as a pressure-filled vehicle to SELL it, and that really resonated with me. I felt comfortable sharing my work with her, and I am confident that her insights will make my query letter WAY stronger.
Clarifying Key Query Letter Focus
Caitlin did a written critique of my query letter and then I followed up with a 10 minute meeting with her to review my re-write. Both experiences were very beneficial and encouraging. I have been struggling with understanding what topics from my novel that I should emphasize in my query letter and Caitlin’s comments provided the final key to knowing what to focus on.

Helpful Query and Pitch Insights
I had a phone call consultation with Saba Sulaiman yesterday. She was very nice and easy to talk to. She asked if I wanted her to talk about my query or if I wanted to ask questions first. We had time for both, and her comments and suggestions were very helpful.
Balanced Feedback and Thoughtful Answers
Stephanie was great! She was patient, kind, and helpful. She gave me a great balance of voluntary information as well as answered questions. I got a lot out of our ten minutes!

Friendly, Honest, and Helpful Advice
10 minutes with an expert. I had my first page critiqued. Linda is friendly and honest. I believe she knows her stuff and will give helpful tips for any writer.
On a personal note, “Thanks Linda.”
Expert Critique for Children’s Nonfiction
I got a written critique of my manuscript from Amanda Shih. She has a lot of experience with childrenís nonfiction and her advice and suggestions were really great. She was very encouraging and helpful. Iím so glad that I got the critique and that I chose Amanda!
Pinpointing What Needs Work
Caitlin was great! This was my second time using her for a consultation – once with my first page and then again with my query – and she’s been very helpful both times. She points right to the parts that need the most work, while also highlighting the best bits of each. I end up taking a ton of notes with her, as she is descriptive with her feedback, and it has already helped me a lot. I’d definitely recommend her for anyone needing help with their SFF manuscripts. Thanks Manuscript Academy!
Boosted My Confidence and Writing
Jessica Watterson represents several authors whom I adore, so I was thrilled to have the opportunity to have her review my query letter. She shared some incredibly helpful tweaks. Additionally, we talked a little about my book’s premise. From that and from my query letter, she had an inspired idea about my book’s title! This, in turn, is spurring me to tweak my novel ever-so-slightly. Most of all, she buttressed my self-confidence. Putting your writing out into the world can be terrifying; and to get such a warm, supportive reception from someone who knows what’s what absolutely made my day. I swear I feel like I’ve been hugged, albeit virtually.
Highly, highly recommend!! Thank you, Jessica!!
She Never Disappoints
I’ve used Caitlin for two other novels and she never disappoints. This was the opening page of my third novel, and she gave me some great advice on how not to distract the reader with too much information, or in this case, the wrong information for the very beginning. She is endlessly smart about these things, extremely helpful and a very pleasant person to talk to.
Inspired and Creative Feedback
Very productive and Eve had plenty of insightful comments. She “got” my writing and had suggestions that were easy for me to apply. Can’t wait for my next session with her.
Focused and Concise Writing
We covered a great deal in only ten minutes. Caitlin had specific, very constructive ideas for sharpening my first page and left me time for questions. Thanks to everyone.
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