Feedback And Reviews
Refines Query with Personalized Notes
Melissa’s review of my query letter was extremely helpful and I appreciated her detailed, personalized notes. Though the ten minutes went fast, she answered all of my questions and gave me a confidence in my (now-revised) query that I lacked. I highly recommend going through this process!
Answers Query Process Questions
My query letter critique with John was really helpful! He answered my questions thoroughly and was super friendly. His suggestions brought up areas I had never thought of. Thank you to all at the Manuscript Academy for this opportunity to learn more about the query process!
Improves First Chapter with Precision
Kaitlyn was so very helpful in evaluating my first chapter! She was precise in her comments and offered several suggestions, not only to improve my Voice and Transitions, but gave me links to research sites that would also be valuable. It was obvious she wanted to include as much as possible of her responses within the time frame we had. I remain grateful to The Manuscript Academy for offering this service and for the busy professionals who make themselves available to share their expertise!
Pinpoints Key Issue in Story
My consultation with Saba was fantastic!
I sensed something was not quite right with my manuscript, but I did not know how to fix it. Saba pointed out to me what was missing in my story even though she just read my query letter. I am now energized to revise my manuscript.
Delivers Insightful Query Advice
Stacey was great! She offered great insight and answered a specific question I had. I got a lot out of my 10 minutes and she was super nice.
Gives Encouraging Memoir Feedback
I highly recommend consults with Leticia Gomez. We discussed my memoir, and she gave helpful feedback on it, my title and book proposal. Her comments were encouraging and motivated me to work more on my project!
Clarifies Querying and Next Steps
My query consultation helped me better understand the querying process and I received fantastic notes to take my work to the next level, furthering me on my journey to publication. I canít recommend this service enough.
Provides Clear Plan for Query
My 10 minute query consultation with Caitlin was so helpful. I chose to meet with her because she likes fantasy and because I was impressed by her observations on the 10 Queries podcast. She was very prepared and shared her thoughts quickly and clearly. Her advice was concrete and I came away with a solid plan for strengthening my query. She managed the time very well; with my agreement she first shared her feedback and reserved 3 minutes at the end to answer my questions. Her tone was positive and encouraging. Highly recommend!
Gives Encouraging and Detailed Feedback
I am truly grateful for this opportunity given by the Manuscript Academy. Honestly, after finishing my work I had some doubts about choosing the right way to follow and consultation with Amy Bishop happened to be exactly what I needed.
I absolutely loved her character. Amy was so kind and considerate during the whole meeting. She gave me detailed feedback about my work, highlighted good and not so good points and answered all my questions. Thanks to Amy once again.
Prepares Queries for Stronger Appeal
Amy offered extremely helpful advice, including specific suggestions, to help me shape my query so that it will be more appealing to agents. She was so incredibly prepared that we had half the time left to discuss other questions I had. I cannot recommend her enough.
Provides Expert Genre-Specific Feedback
My 10-page read and 15-minute consultation with Jessica Watterson was incredibly helpful. Jessica picked out weaknesses in the pages and query that Iíd missed, and made simple, concrete suggestions for improvement. Itís great to get advice from someone with so much experience of the genre, and Jessica couldnít have been more helpful and encouraging. Having made her suggested edits, I already feel my novel is closer to being submission ready.
Finds the Heart of a Story
Fiona was just magical! I met with her to evaluate my MG fantasy query letter. Fiona helped my weed through the unnecessary details that were cluttering my query and instead guided me to find the real heart of my story and what makes it unique. Fiona was a pleasure to talk with and her feedback was contructive and honest.
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