The feedback I received was very valuable

I chose Carina Licon to critique the first 50 pages of my YA manuscript. I chose Carina because her bio and manuscript wish list was aligned with my novel. The feedback I received from Carina was very valuable for me. I felt I had a relatable character and an interesting concept for for story so I was delighted when Carina responded positively to the work I have done. She provided me an editorial letter with constructive comments on pacing, character development, story timeline and really strong good questions. I felt that she understood my main character so well and challenged me perfectly to develop more detail around my MC. The 50 page critique was very professional and thorough. I know that these insights will help me tighten my story and improve the clarity and efficiency of my writing. A terrific investment that will help me hone my craft as a writer and a wonderful experience of better understanding what it would be like working with an editor. Thank you Manuscript Academy (Julie, Jessica and the whole team) for this wonderful platform that provides access to me, a writer based in Australia, to tap into the worlds largest market for fiction.

Christine Yates
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