Feedback And Reviews
Money Well Spent
Christina’s feedback was insightful and sensitive. She hit on some key weaknesses which, once corrected, will significantly improve my story and how it is told. I appreciated her efforts in capturing the intent of my work and how it could be honed. She included a high level of detail in her analysis and recommendations. I could see that she clearly took the time and made the effort to understand and appreciate what I’ve written thus far and how it can be improved. I could not be more pleased with her constructive feedback. I feel well respected, encouraged, and challenged by her comments. Now I know what directions to pursue. She provided a high value for the expense and for what I hope will be a great return. I couldn’t have begun to proceed to the next level without her wise counsel.

I used my codes for a great feedback package with Christina Lopez!
I am at a stage with my manuscript where I needed more than a query or synopsis review. I wanted a professional opinion on my writing, too, and some input on how my three pieces fit together. Christina read my query, synopsis and first 50 pages, then gave written feedback as well as a 10 minute consultation to follow.
Her input highlighted positives as well as strands needing work that I can apply across the manuscript to get my novel submission-ready. She also gave great feedback on my plan for my current revision, encouraging me to keep going.
I am so glad I saved up my codes while I worked on the book to a point where significant professional feedback was needed.
Thanks, Manuscript Academy for all you do to develop us aspiring authors!

Excellent advice from a seasoned pro.
I chose Fiona for her extraordinary range of experiences with children’s literature and also because of her history in film, which echoes my own.
This was my second session with Fiona. The first was query related. The second covered the first 10 pages of my middle grade novel. She is incredibly clear and precise about what doesn’t work for her, and what won’t work for publishers, to whom she has to sell anything she chooses to represent.
I have a very clear picture now of what I need to achieve and look forward to putting her thoughts into action, as difficult as some may be. I could not be happier with our conversation.

Delighted, Challenged and Ready to Revise
So happy with my critique. It was incredibly helpful. The feedback gave me a good grasp of what’s working and asked exactly the right questions about my worldbuilding, structure, and POV balance to help me strengthen my opening. It also gave me concrete next steps for revision and a clear understanding of how my opening reads to agents and editors. I feel encouraged and equipped to revise.

Awesome!
I can’t recommend this service enough! The same goes for Caitlin McDonald!
She was incredibly personable and helpful, clearly having read my query letter prior. I had a few very specific questions which she also prioritized. I left our session feeling much more clear and confident about how to move forward.

Super agent!
Fiona was an absolute delight to work with. I have had two consultations with her, and both were invaluable.
Thank you for offering this amazing service!

Small but Mighty!
I was able to spend a small but very valuable amount of time with Alice Speilburg this week. I had her review my query and my first 10 pages. She had some very explicit ideas for how to improve the pages of the book. I have made the changes and I believe the book is stronger already. I found her to be friendly and kind. I would highly recommend choosing her for your next critique!

Expert guidance
Tamara’s advice made all the difference! She truly understood the heart of my story and approached the work with precision and genuine interest. Thanks to her expertise and talent for language my query letter improved enormously.

Thank you Stephanie
Stephanie critiqued my query letter, and I was very pleased and impressed with her comments. Her input was concise and very actionable. She was incredibly supportive as well, pointing out strengths in the letter, while offering ideas to heighten the emotional stakes of my plot paragraphs, and indicating what an agent would want to know more about.
This was an extremely positive experience, and I’m grateful for the opportunity to have a professional review my letter. I will feel more confident now as I query!

Details are Important
Kelly did a great job zeroing in on the specific details that I need for my first ten pages. It is great to have this level of expertise available here at the Manuscript Academy. I highly recommend having Kelly review your pages for the specifics that sometimes are missed when we are in the midst of our stories.
Thanks so much Kelly,
Bonnie Basham

Arrived Early–Hooray!
Samantha did a great job evaluating my query letter and synopsis and even provided a template to follow as well. I was also excited that she sent my evaluation much sooner than the due date. It was great to open my email and have good news.
I highly recommend booking Samantha for query/synopsis evaluations if you can do such. It takes the mystery out the equation!
Bonnie Basham

Hallelujah for Helpful Hannah’s Hints!
Hannah Robinson gave me lots of specific suggestions and techniques to improve the memoir chapters that I need the most help with. She also complimented me on improving my query–she’d done a query critique for me earlier this year. She encouraged me to keep going and said she’ll be here when I need her again.
Thanks for giving us these opportunities.
