Feedback And Reviews
Kind and Professional Query Guidance
Caitlin was professional and kind. Her feedback on my query was insightful and helpful.
Specific and Actionable Query Advice
Jessica was specific and thorough with our ten minutes. She gave me feedback that I can use to immediately improve my query letter, plus she gave me feedback about my bookís word count. (Itís on the long side and will likely be a red flag when itís time to query. Jessica provided a suggestion on where I need to aim for in that area.) Overall, it was efficient and a worthwhile investment. After I incorporate her feedback, I plan to book a second session with Jessica. I appreciate Manuscript Academy for providing these opportunities for new writers. It can feel isolating to do this work alone. Collaboration makes for a higher quality product and a more confident writer.
Helpful Feedback on Logline Writing
Megan was kind enough to review several loglines I had, a request a little out of the usual format. She identified a few things she would like different, which was very helpful.
Fixing Character Faults and Depth
Stephanie was personable and sweet during our conversation. She helped me realize some faults in my characters and suggested resources that could help me fix them.
Thoughtful Feedback on Query Alignment
Alyssa was courteous and positive. She gave me great feedback and lots to think about regarding my query and how it relates to my manuscript. I really enjoyed our conversation.
Above and Beyond Consultation Experience
Esther was great! She went above and beyond to answer my questions. I would definitely book a consultation with her again!
Engaging and Friendly Query Feedback
John Cusick offered thoughtful feedback on my middle grade fantasy first page. He was engaging and friendly (i.e. not scary). As a writer himself, I appreciated his editing notes. If you’re lucky enough to get an opportunity for a consult with him, grab it.
Crystal-Clear Manuscript Guidance
Such clear guidance! Mr. Cusick knew what I was attempting to do even more, at some points, than I knew what I was attempting. The comments all made so much sense once I got back to work on my story!
Spot-On Structural Story Advice
Fiona was spot-on with her comments about my MG book, “Lockbox.” She made a comment that it should be a screenplay and the funny thing is … it was a screenplay and then I made it into a book as well! She pointed out that I needed to keep the book more about the main protagonist which, of course, trigged a rewrite for the book.
I appreciate all of you giving us writers the opportunity to get us in front of agents and editors. It only makes us better writers.
Stacey
Invaluable Access to Industry Experts
Having access to pro’s like Alyssa is such a wonderful resource — well worth the money!
Detailed and Respectful Editorial Feedback
I had a wonderful consultation with Molly Cusick! I paid for three ten-minute consultations, and they were worth every penny. She told me line by line what worked and what did not–and why–and all her feedback was very kindly and respectfully given. She was very knowledgeable about the children’s publishing market and had even researched the comps I used in my queries so she could give me feedback on them. I will definitely seek her advice again.
Professional and Thoughtful Story Insights
What a wonderful opportunity it was to speak with Molly Cusick! She is kind, thoughtful and professional. Molly provided excellent suggestions and insight. I would highly recommend her, especially since she has experience not only as an editor, but also an agent.
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