Feedback And Reviews
Saves Time with Honest Feedback
Kaitlyn was kind and honest and gave me just the feedback I was looking for. Her comments will save me time and doubt as I query and help me figure out next steps with my manuscript. I am grateful.
Breaks Down Queries with Precision
Melissa always has something concise and powerful to say. Just a few words, and I understand the big picture of what I’m missing and the direction needed to fix it. She is very constructive and helpful with feedback that helps, as I prefer being coached directly, without sugar-coating or apology. I’ve had several sessions with her and wish I could have her advice on speed dial.

Delivers Concise and Helpful Critique
Molly conveyed a lot of information in 15 minutes. She came well prepared and had insightful comments during our discussion–she went a long way towards assuaging some concerns I had with my query package, and I’m glad she offers her time to do this!
Brings Clarity and Excitement
I’ve now had two consolations with Fiona Kenshole, and both have been fabulous. I left with clarity and newfound excitement for my project both times.
Explains Why Queries Get Rejected
Amy’s feedback on my first 10 pages helped me understand why I keep getting “it’s not my thing” passes on my novel queries. I’m grateful to benefit from her vision and experience. She provided specific suggestions for improving my work and (hopefully) snagging more agents’ attention. I can’t tell you how critical that was for me!
She also pointed out a flaw in my query letter that might be turning agents off. So helpful!
I appreciated Amy’s supportiveness and enthusiasm for helping. It was great to be able to ask “burning questions” about the industry that had been bugging me since I started writing. I encourage any writer souls who are lost or maybe just need an extra nudge in the right direction to book a consultation with Amy!
Boosts Confidence During Querying
Esther was such a pleasure to talk to. She offered me great advice and seemed so genuine! It gave me the confidence boost I needed during this difficult time of querying. Iím so happy I chose Esther for my ten minutes.
Offers Clear and Practical Advice
Esther was friendly and offered great advice for my story. She also shared some relevant comp titles. Out of all of the critiques Iíve had on Manuscript Academy, hers was the most helpful.
Provides Kind and Insightful Guidance
Melissa was so helpful and more than that she was KIND. I was having one of those days where I couldn’t make sentences, my youngest was screeching at the top of his lungs, and I was feeling less than “authorly”. Melissa put me at ease and then went through my query piece by piece with tangible ways to improve it so that it got right to the heart of my story. I went into the consultation feeling like I’d never be a “real writer” and left it feeling like maybe I was already on my way. Thank you, Melissa!!!
Gives Encouraging and Actionable Feedback
This writer is at a loss for words. Alyssa is exactly the expert I need to help me get my novel where it needs to be. She gives the kind of feedback I’ve been craving and does it in a way that doesn’t make me want to crawl under my desk and cry. She provides ideas and inspiration in a way that almost makes me think the ideas are mine, which is nice. And she gives enough positive reinforcement to keep me motivated to edit and edit again.
She gave me specific feedback and specific homework, and both of those things are exactly what I was hoping for. I know the book will be better because of her feedback (and feedback from another agent). I definitely got more than I paid for out of this consultation and hope to have more after I’ve completed my homework! 🙂
Thanks to J, J, and V for making this happen! You went above and beyond, and I’m so grateful.
Encourages Writers with Helpful Feedback
Larissa was very encouraging and kind, and she also gave me great advice to improve my query letter. She also took time to answer my questions. This consultation was very helpful.
Offers Enthusiastic and Spot-On Critiques
Kaitlyn was absolutely amazing. She was a pleasure to talk to and VERY enthusiastic. I appreciated her spot-on critiques. She bettered both my writing and confidence. 10000/10 would recommend her to EVERYONE!
Provides Encouraging and Actionable Guidance
My conversation with Megan Barnard was very helpful – felt like a luxury to have the opportunity for such clear responses to the first 10 pages of my thriller, THE LAST TIME WE DIED, after two years of hard work inside my own writer bubble. She’s a true professional who instantly put me at ease and offered actionable advice to factor in with responses from my other test readers. Best wishes to the whole Manuscript Academy team.