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Last week I had a 10 minute review of my query letter with Bridget Smith. She was pleasant, kind, funny, and most of all very helpful. The time goes super fast and she packed a lot of great tips into it. She told me what not to change, what wasn’t needed, and what to beef up a bit. Though we only talked about my query letter, her comments have me thinking of ways to better my pitch and synopsis as well. Very happy with how it went. Thanks, Bridget.
Bill Bibo
May 13, 2025
From “Okay” to Outstanding!
Emma gave me an amazing written critique on the first 50 pages of my vampire/witch romantacy. She gave me suggestions and shared her insight to improve every page, and to take the pages to the next level! I can’t thank her enough for her kind words and helpful comments. I highly recommend Emma for her talent and real interest in my project.
Sharron Riddle
May 13, 2025
5 star experience
It’s my first time seeking out critique from industry in preparation for stepping into the query trenches so I had the typical apprehension of stepping into the unknown. There are so many avenues for aspiring authors to shell out money for services, unregulated and no guarantee of outcome value.
Fortunately, the critique feedback I received was satisfactory beyond my uneducated expectations. It was encouraging, thorough, and most importantly, actionable.
Tokan Crown
April 25, 2025
Her pinpoint accuracy was what I needed
Renée was the antidote to my illness. Her pinpoint accuracy in identifying problem areas in my query and first ten pages was the insight and course correction I needed to fix my writing. She was personable, perceptive, and pragmatic, and had a wonderful sense of humor. I’ve since started following her on social media—she is a wealth of information and has become a part of my “everything about writing” diet.
Glenn Myers
April 25, 2025
Extremely helpful consultation
I truly appreciated Renée Fountain’s insightful and direct feedback. Whenever I go into consultations, I am always open to feedback about what’s working and what isn’t. I finally feel that my opening pages are where they need to be, after this extremely helpful consultation.
Elizabeth Conran
April 25, 2025
Excellent 50-page critique
I got a 50-page critique from Renee Fountain. It was excellent. I feel like she told me exactly what was holding back my manuscript. Now I am redoing the whole thing from the ground up, and I think when I finish the plot will be much faster moving and the voice will be so much stronger.
Scott Evans
April 25, 2025
Honest and encouraging
I had a fantastic ten-minute query consultation with Renee Fountain. She offered targeted, actionable feedback on my query, including ideas for making it more succinct and effective. She answered my questions honestly and provided words of encouragement about my efforts. Renee offers such a wealth of expertise and the ten minutes with her was absolutely worth it.
Cassandra Worrell
April 25, 2025
Patient and Professional
Renee patiently read through three iterations of my book’s prologue and each time helped me to further fine tune what I needed to say, in fewer words. She was on time with her assessments and always professional.
Lorie Greenspan
April 25, 2025
Exactly what I needed!
Natalie gave incredibly helpful and constructive feedback on my query, going through it section by section. It was exactly what I needed! She was extremely generous with answering my questions, too.
Ellen Adair
April 25, 2025