Testimonials And Reviews
Kelly “Gets” It
Unlike the majority of rejection letters that I’ve received for my middle-grade fantasy, Kelly Van Sant provided detailed feedback that focused on both my query letter and my first page. The goal of our meeting was to figure out why I wasn’t receiving “fulls” but only polite compliments.
Kelly totally zeroed in on my premise, and I felt like she totally “got” my setup, stakes, and themes. She suggested minor tweaks to the query and a refocus on the main character for the first page. Plus she answered all my questions. Our time spent together was well worth it.

Great reading and advice
Sheila’s great. She quickly helped me revise my query and gave thoughtful and helpful feedback to my first ten pages. I highly recommend her!

The consultation with Bridget provided me with a clear direction for my manuscript and cleared out any insecurities with answers to my questions.

Compassionate Critiques
Linda Camacho exudes consideration in her critiquing sessions. Not only did she show genuine interest in my project, but also as me as a person. In both sessions I had with her, she spent time to understand my manuscript by asking clarifying questions in addition to providing her thoughts. My query transformed under her guidance, and she offered much needed encouragement, insight into the industry, and advice in regards to my first ten pages. I am grateful for her time, and especially for how she treated me with empathy and not just another box to tick off in her busy schedule.

I can’t thank her enough
Bridget was thoughtful, kind, and thorough in our consultation meeting. I am confident that her feedback will be invaluable in my querying journey!

The query letter pro
Thao opened my eyes to opportunities to improve my query letter which I am certain I would not have otherwise identified. She was kind and helpful. Thank you so much, Thao!

Well Done Dawn
Kaitlyn Sanchez said my picture book manuscript was well done. I’m so happy to hear this from a respected agent after I worked for years on my story. She gave me insights on how to edit my work to possibly increase an editor’s interest. This seasoned agent was very approachable and upbeat, yet so professional. This is the second time she gave me feedback on my work and I’ll seek her advice again soon. Thank you.

Helpful!
Renee’s advice made a lot of sense, and she answered all of my questions. Overall, she was patient, professional, and very approachable. My query is so much better because of her help.

Thorough Review of Query Letter
Alice Spielberg was generous with her thoughtful review of my query letter. It was so helpful to have feedback from a real agent to let me know where I was getting it right and where I could improve. 10/10 recommend!

Sharp query editor
Enjoyed my 15-minute Query/First Ten Pages review session with Alice Speilburg. Alice was very insightful and supportive. Cut through a lot of the problems I’ve had, especially with my query. I’m in much better shape because of it. Would highly recommend.

Excellent!
Excellent!
Renee was kind, professional, knowledgeable and on-target.
Worth every penny.
Thanks!

Excellent feedback!
This was one of the best consultations/critiques I’ve had with Manuscript Academy. While I enjoy the face-to-face consultations, I found this written critique to be the most useful so far. Ms. Fountain provided me with great insight into areas I can improve my writing style, the flow of my novel, and create a more engaging storyline. Having notes and concrete examples to review is extremely helpful. I would (and most likely will!) book another critique with Ms. Fountain.

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