Feedback And Reviews
Suggestions I could easily understand and incorporate without losing the integrity of my work
Caitlin had carefully read my ten pages and offered suggestions I could easily understand and incorporate without losing the integrity of my work. I found the session helpful and began editing after letting her directions settle. I have now rewritten the first chapter and feel it is improved. She was always courteous and on point.

She showed enthusiasm for my project while conveying some of the harsh realities of the publishing industry.
In our ten minute chat, Rachel was warm, welcoming and generous with her time. She showed enthusiasm for my project while conveying some of the harsh realities of the publishing industry. She answered all my question and gave great suggestions for my query. My thanks to Rachel and The Manuscript Academy team!

Incredibly helpful!
Jessica was great! She gave me commentary not only on the overall state of my picture book manuscript, but also specific items for me to tweak. She was incredibly helpful, and I highly recommend her!

We discussed the concept and comps.
Melissa was kind, outgoing, and fun to work with. We discussed the concept and comps, and she gave me feedback on how to improve one paragraph on my first page. I wish we had more than ten minutes; I would definitely enjoy working with her again.

She totally helped reframe the plot description so it flows.
Alyssa was fabulous. Asked questions that helped me understand where I am in my development not so much in novel writing but in query skills. She totally helped reframe the plot description so it flows a little better.

She gave precise, concrete advice.
Amy Bishop was terrific. Very sharp. She gave precise, concrete advice. She’s a very good editor.
And a very nice person. I was very happy with my 10 minutes with her and immediately rewrote my query based on her advice.

Advice was insightful and clear.
Megan Barnard was extremely helpful. She got what I’m doing and spotted the bits I’m fond of. Her advice was insightful and clear. I corrected my first page according to her advice and I’m much happier with it. I felt we had a terrific ten minutes and she seemed to be enjoying herself which is a wonderful compliment.

She delivered clear insights and specific suggestions
The query consult with Caitlin was a terrific experience. She delivered clear insights and specific suggestions–and did so with kindness. I’m so happy to have had the opportunity to receive her expert feedback.

He answered questions, addressed my doubts, and in the end was encouraging and patient
At our meeting, Lane Heymont proved himself to be a magician. I filled several pages of notes with his information and insights, yet in the short time he didn’t seem the least bit rushed. He answered questions, addressed my doubts, and in the end was encouraging and patient. From my research, I know he’s a successful agent; but after our meeting, I know he’s a gifted teacher.

The most insightful, valuable 10 minutes of my writing career
Stacey is a consummate professional…the most insightful, valuable 10 minutes of my writing career 🙂

I am excited to rework my query and think it will be stronger thanks to her advice
Caitlin was wonderful! She reviewed my query with me and gave me great insight into how to integrate “industry standard” pieces, such as comps. We also discussed how important specificity is in a query and she helped me identify places where my language was vague. She was a great manager of time, making sure to leave enough time for me to ask questions at the end after sharing her thoughts. I am excited to rework my query and think it will be stronger thanks to her advice.

She offered really astute insights and suggestions
I was so happy to get Kayla Lightner’s take on the first ten pages of my novel. She offered really astute insights and suggestions. I was concerned that what I was trying to create, in terms of the voice, was not on key, and Kayla provided more than the feedback I needed. Her comments were clear, which of course was helpful–but on top of that she was warm and encouraging. My only regret is that the conversation couldn’t have lasted longer. It was a delightful fifteen minutes.
