Feedback And Reviews
Collaborative query experience was amazing!
Baker was personable, knowledgeable, helpful, and generous with his time and efforts. I appreciated the experience of talking with him about the query itself and the overall industry, and once he’d rewritten the query, I was incredibly happy with the finished product. I haven’t started submitting yet but I feel like I’ll be in a much stronger position when I do. Many thanks, Baker!

Short sweet and succinct
Krista gave such good suggestions, along with a positive voice.

24 Karat Gold Katharine
My 30 pages + query consult was terrific. Helpful constructive feedback, enthusiastic comments about the strengths of the query and manuscript and proposal, and solid suggestions for tweaks. Thank you Katharine!

Kudos to Katharine
My query +proposal +pages consult was all I could have wished for. Enthusiastic comments about the strengths of the work, constructive suggestions for tweaks, some guidance on changing the order of info in the query, and a connection to a local to me resource. Her feedback was very helpful.

Stellar feedback
My session with Tamara went great! She took the time to familiarize herself with my query ahead of time, was organized and efficient with her points, and gave some very useful feedback.
It was well worth it!

Excellent investment, great feedback
Jessica was extremely helpful during our 10 minute consultation. She was able to provide analysis and feedback that I hadn’t considered, and that has allowed me to shape the story in a clearer direction. It was time and money very well spent. Thank you Jessica!

I Bow to Erica Bowman
Erica Bauman is such a delightful human that just chatting with her would have been a lovely experience on its own, but during our ten-minute meeting to talk about my novel’s first page, she shared insights that astounded me—and helped me greatly. Erica possesses a remarkable x-ray vision that saw into the characters and beyond that opening scene. What I’m particularly grateful for is her suggestion to start the action just a few moments before I had. Thanks to Erica, a quick-fix ultimately enhanced the entire chapter significantly.

Very Insightful!
Manuscript Academy delivers another great Live Query + 10-Page Read + 15-Minute Consultation! Ruqayyah Daud provided great feedback into what was working well and the few areas she thought we could improve. Plus, she shared excellent market insight on how to position our work even more!

Positive and upbeat.
In our ten minute consultation, Liv Ivanov gave great suggestions on how to consolidate and clarify my query letter, something that can be challenging for a Sci-Fi novel! All her suggestions were positive and encouraging.

Targeted, Thoughtful, Game-Changing
Working with Fiona was an absolute game-changer for both my picture book manuscript and query letter. She brought a thoughtful, insightful eye to my work and offered feedback that was not only clear and specific but also deeply encouraging.
Even though she recommended not changing the manuscript (which I had previously revised with the help of another wonderful consultant, Emily Daluga), Fiona gave me essential, targeted advice on my query letter—pointing out that it read more like middle grade than picture book and offering concrete suggestions to fix that. Thanks to her guidance, I believe my query now truly reflects the heart and tone of my story.
Fiona’s insight made all the difference. I honestly believe her input could be what helps me land an agent for this project. I’m incredibly grateful for her time, expertise, and generosity, and I highly recommend her to any writer looking to take their work to the next level.
—Elyssa

Generous, Insightful, and Story-Shaping Notes
Working with Emily was an incredible experience. Her editorial letter was packed with deep, story-level insight that helped me see my manuscript in a completely new light. She asked smart, thoughtful questions about character motivation, world-building, and emotional stakes—always in a way that was constructive, not prescriptive.
Emily gently challenged me to clarify my character’s arc, add more intentionality to plot points, and strengthen the emotional payoff of the ending. She even suggested ways to enhance the story visually through art direction—a level of detail that made the world of difference in my re-write.
Her notes didn’t just point out what needed fixing; they helped me understand why it mattered. I walked away feeling energized and equipped, with a clear path forward and renewed excitement for my project.
If you’re looking for an editor who brings both heart and precision to your work, I can’t recommend Emily highly enough.
—Elyssa

So encouraging!
Anjanette was very clear in her suggestions and gave me wonderful advice! I really appreciated her input and insights.
