Feedback And Reviews
The Feedback I Needed, Exactly When I Needed It
After dozens of rejections, I needed more than a ‘yes’ or ‘no’—I needed guidance. This critique gave me that. It showed me where the story could shine brighter and where readers might stumble, all in a way that felt supportive instead of overwhelming.

Time Well Spent
Jonathan was great. We had a wonderfully frank and fun conversation and he was more than generous with his time. I gained some insights and have a clearer sense of where improvements can be made. I hope we will connect again in the future!~

Ten Minute Consultation With a Gorgeous Baddie
My ten minute live consultation with Taj McCoy, was so helpful and straight to the point. Not only does she have a kind aura, she was able to spot what was I missing in my first page instantly, she was clear and concise with her feedback, and gave me encouraging words to keep pursuing my goal of becoming a published author. Thank you!

Noelle Was Terrific!
Noelle first offered valuable suggestions on what to add—and what to cut—from my query letter. She then reviewed the first ten pages of my novel, providing guidance on how to enliven the writing and offering advice on developing deeper descriptions of my main characters.

Hannah was professional, insightful, and kind.
She was able to pinpoint my blindspots and suggest some tweaks that will go a long way in making my opening pages as clear and polished as possible. She also offered up additional comp titles with similar subject matter and POV. Speaking with an industry professional to clear up my doubts gave me the confidence I needed to move forward with querying.

Invaluable!
The time flies, but it is invaluable to have direct feedback. I am so grateful to Jessica for walking me through her thoughts and reactions. The session provided clarity of what was working and what wasn’t and directed me in how to keep workshopping certain query lines I was struggling with. She even caught a grammar error in my first few pages that I’ve glazed over 100 times- so grateful!

Great Feedback!
Noelle gave me such great feedback on my query! She was so nice and very constructive. She helped me talk through the changes I should make and what I should keep, and overall made me feel way more confident about what I’m sending out to agents. Thanks again!

Super clear feedback
I had a great call with Erica about my query and first 10 pages. Even though I signed up for the call very last minute, she asked beforehand if I had any specific questions to focus on. She walked me through her feedback for my query paragraph by paragraph and gave me suggestions for places I could improve. Also, I had trouble connecting to the meet on my desktop, and she still spent the full 15 minutes with me, which I really appreciated.

The Best
Kiana was exceptional! She was very thorough and gave me the most useful advice and concrete actions that helped me completely revise my entire query letter. I’m looking forward to working with her again in the future! THANK YOU KIANA!

Clear-eyed Consultation w/ Erica
My 15 minutes w/ Erica were so helpful! She emailed the day before to ask if I had any questions or topics we should be sure to cover; she was mindful of using our time well, and she was overall friendly and positive. I left w/ 3-4 clear, actionable items to revise on my query and pages. I highly recommend Erica!

Ismita Hussain One on One
I thoroughly enjoyed my one on one session with Ismita and learned a lot. She is rigorous, knowledgeable, and still manages to be friendly. I would recommend her without hesitation.

A Jessica Felleman Rave
I had my one on one zoom meeting (Query/10 pages) with Jessica a few days ago and couldn’t be happier with her feedback. Her insights into my query and pages were spot on. She let me know potential problems clearly but in a generous way that was not intimidating or overwhelming. Jessica is professional and approachable and I would recommend her sessions 100%.
