Feedback And Reviews
Spot-On Suggestions!
I had a ten-page written critique from Krista. Her line edits made the chapter read more smoothly and her big-picture suggestions about pacing and “bread crumbing” made tons of sense. What a great resource. Thank you very much!

Wonderful, Jessica
Every comment was brilliant. Her insight is humbling. I love learning things and I learned a lot from her. I believe she helped me so much. What is there to say but thank you, thank you, and thank you.

Kind, helpful, and to the point
I had a LIVE Query + 10-Page Read + 15-Minute Consultation with Kelly for my Middle Grade time travel story.
Kelly was very kind. She started the call by checking that we were talking about the correct manuscript and asked if I had specific questions for her, which I did. She answered them with very helpful information/advice and added her own thoughts and comments on the material she had read. She also asked me a couple of questions.
The 15 minutes were just the right length for what I needed, and I’m very glad the lovely people from the Manuscript Academy recommended this format to me!

Puts AI to shame
Bridget caught on immediately as to what I was doing with my project. She clarified some misinformation I had been given. I faced a dilemma that she helped me work through and find a viable solution. Time and money well spent.

Gee, I didn’t know that!
I’m grateful to Amy Paradysz for copyediting one hundred pages of my manuscript. The edits were very helpful. It’s those fussy commas and smack-the-forhead “Oh, right, that’s much more logical,” epiphanies. The edits were thoughtful and detailed. I am grateful for the style sheet as well. She loved my query letter. Yay!

Wonderful!
Jonathan’s editorial comments on the first fifty pages of my book were incredibly thorough and helpful. I have been struggling with that part of the book for ages, and he not only helped me figure out what the overall problem was, but he gave me extremely detailed notes on how to fix it, all of which I agreed with. I feel so grateful for his kind and respectful help.

More Than I Expected
Stephanie gave me some excellent advice on some edits, giving much more detail than I expected. It was all very constructive and was just what I needed to hear. Thank you!

My hand almost fell off
From taking notes! Kiana didn’t waste a minute as she targeted the areas I can improve upon. Her advice was thorough and kindly delivered with room for my questions. Very helpful and motivating meeting.

Above and beyond!
This was the very first time I spoke with a professional about my book and I went in extremely nervous. Ms. Fountain was very supportive throughout the consultation. I was impressed by how thoroughly she had read the material I submitted, as she provided specific, actionable feedback that is going to vastly improve my query package.
Overall a very positive experience!

Hannah provided clarity and direction ..
Hannah was very helpful in providing feedback on my first 10 pages. Her insight will help me reshape chapter one with clarity and crisp communication.

Very Helpful
Samantha’s comments on my synopsis helped me clarify what was working and what wasn’t. I have a challenging plot to get across in a synopsis and Samantha’s input was really helpful to understand what was confusing for someone who hadn’t read the book. Thank you so much.

Super kind and helpful
Jessica Felleman was super kind and helpful in our quick critique. She had thoughtful suggestions to make my query clearer and more interesting, as well as helped me develop a one-sentence hook for the opening that I’d been struggling with. She went through each of her line edits and allowed me time to ask clarifying questions, all while being kind and mindful of the time. At the end, she even suggested I query another agent friend of hers – and that person wasn’t on my list at all, so I appreciated the head’s up!
